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With ageless beauty, the dust will flow...
Like echoing tides, set into rows...
I speak of time, of chimes, hell even of rhymes...
As the time will flow like dust in the wind...

Will it sting, or will it blow?
Will you make this true so...
Never mind this or that this is just tit for tat.
Just remember that time can be like dust in the wind, gone before you know it.
©2007-2009 ~DraketheFallen1
:icondrakethefallen1:

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When beauty lasts forever...

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:iconpeacoxpink:
thats a great view of anything. Your poem made me smile with how good it is
:icondrakethefallen1:
Thank you very much I appreciate it very much.

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"There is no Underdog"
:iconwolkenschieber:
I agree. It reminds me of some book I read a long time ago. Not sure which one, though. Anyway, great poem. Very figurative.

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"Reality means you live until you die, the agent says. The real truth is nobody wants reality." Chuck Palahniuk - Survivor

"When two elephants fight, it is the grass that suffers."
:icondrakethefallen1:
I try, and thanks a bunch

--
"There is no Underdog"

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